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phoenixflame
Member since March 15, 2009
Member for 17 years, 2 months
Just Live.
When you believe in forever
You're believing in wasted time
When you believe in the present
You're believing that your heart beats race the ticking clock
When you believe in the past
You're trusting fast fading memories
When all that is said and done
What's left to believe in?
Friends?Family?
The past is looming, the future fading
When this life is over, where to we end?
Where do we begin?
Don't believe in time
That your dreams are fading
That the nightmare is waking
Trust animosity, don't be scared to fall in love
Don't dwell on the past, present or future.
Just live.
phoenixflame’s timeline
- March 2024
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14 ThuAnniversary
15 years of membership
- March 2019
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14 ThuAnniversary
10 years of membership
- March 2014
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14 FriAnniversary
5 years of membership
- March 2010
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14 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- January 2010
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04 MonReceived a critique
on Just Live. from @DawningDaytripper
"Jezz Phoenix, you have grown up. Right before our very eyes, in your writing I mean. That was deep. And very far seeing and wise. I throughly enjoyed that. I can see alot in this write I havn't seen before. And I like i…" -
04 Mon
- December 2009
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22 TueReceived a critique
on This Is A Game. [RE - EDITED] from @Kob
"Interesting, I'll take it on board one day and alter it a bit. No fear it's yours and always will be. But I'll give it a once over and give it back to you. Nice read, but as mentioned, a bit longwinded. Took me back to…" -
22 TueReceived a critique
on This Is A Game. [RE - EDITED] from @Kob
"Hi Phoenix, As I said recently, I liked your poem, it touched a nerve ending, memorys came flooding back to me from long ago. But I like rhymes as well, so there was nothing else for it. I've put the two together, your…" -
14 MonPosted a poem
This Is A Game. [RE - EDITED]
"I'm not the ditzy little girl, The one with tits for brains" - November 2009
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14 Sat
- March 2009
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21 SatFirst critique offered
on "SURREAL CANVASSE" by @orgami
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15 SunHighest posting month
March 2009 — 5 poems
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14 SatFirst publication
Sonnet For War
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14 SatJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
Coffee<3
I enjoy long walks on frosty winter mornings
I miss living by the ocean, with calm breezes and sun-warmed sand
I am American Indian, and proud of it.
I dance at powwows, and follow my heritage fervently.
I play the guitar, bass guitar, tenor saxophone.
In highschool yet, head cheerleader, bookworm, debate geek.
Not afraid to make new friends.
:)
Location: New Town, NoDak, USA
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Recent Work
Just Live.
This Is A Game. [RE - EDITED]
Past Four A.M.
Summer's Leaving Song
Current Chronicle
She.
For You.
Riot
Desire
Conflict
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