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Rhiannon1010
By Rhiannon1010, 27 November, 2011

Well, the day after Thanksgiving, my boyfriend dumped me, over text, for one of my super hot, skanky friends. He had spent the previous day at her house, and, as it turns out, had been cheating on me with her for several week. Thanksgiving night, I had a feeling that he had lost interest in me, and was more interested in my friend. I told him my feelings and he assured me that they where unfounded. At 11:30 am the next morning he dumped me! WTF!?!

the_fool

the_fool

13 years 7 months ago

ummm...

is that a 'AND' before 'as it turns out,'
'for several weekS'?

feels kinda like a facebook update, not much of a piece.
interesting, but not poetic to me.
but who am i?

S

scribbler

13 years 7 months ago

Hmm....

Sounds as if it is better you found out now than later. Plenty more fish in the pond

weirdelf

weirdelf

13 years 7 months ago

We had an old saying when I worked in the film industry

and the director made unreasonable, egotistical or plain stupid demands or decisions
"tell him fuck him, no, fuck him, tell him nothing"

You are well out of it and he will get AIDS from the skank and you will become a fully realised independent strong female poet (or whatever you want)

loved

loved

13 years 6 months ago

You R Simply Excellent... my Ex Fan

I was feeling so awkward
that the Wizard of poetry
should lower down
to add himself , as a
fan of a non -poet me....

Thanks you erase me from the surface...
But I love your comment above
about fucking ....

With your permission ,
may i use it as a Quote'''''
Thanks..ex fan...
My maker .
I know you must have abandoned reading my poetry ----slang as it may appear to thee

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

13 years 6 months ago

Hello,

He is an immature dirt bag who has no taste or class... you are better off without him.

always, Cat

Geremia

Geremia

13 years 6 months ago

There is nothing more hurtful

There is nothing more hurtful than betrayal from t he ones we love, Life finds a way, and your wounds will heal .Many times, I think it is our Ego that suffers most., However, whatever the cause, t he pain is the same. Go on with your studies, This was meant to be.

Respectfully,

LONGO

Rhiannon1010

Rhiannon1010

13 years 6 months ago

he no longer causes me pain

but i still feel slightly sick when i see him in the halls. i think i suffered from frusteration attraction. lookit up, tee hee! :)

Geremia

Geremia

13 years 6 months ago

Well, I've dumped and been

Well, I've dumped and been dumped many, many, many, many, many times. If you ever need a gypsy curse, let me know. Problem is they don't work. :)

LONGO

Rhiannon1010

Rhiannon1010

13 years 6 months ago

lol.

you have quite a sence of humor, but thanks for the offer! ;)

Geremia

Geremia

13 years 6 months ago

:) Read THE ROSE, and you

:) Read THE ROSE, and you think you had probems. Women in the early 20th century==especially Italian women--had little choices. At any rate, keep well and kick ass!

LONGO