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Rula
By Rula, 31 May, 2012

You promised to bid that heart
a love-a life,

but all it gained
are woes and lies
instead.

So
if you can't keep up
your promises,
and pay that heart its dues,
why don't you
give one last lie?
Say:
I love you

Rula

Rula

12 years 9 months ago

Anna

Many thanks for coming to read this and sorry for the belated reply.Seems I've neglected my blog a while,haven't I ?

Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

12 years 9 months ago

Not too constant myself

dear Rula. Many walks in the woods
take me away, before snow comes.

I sam revising my many poems and
will make myself little books, one of
which will be hand written and painted,
another where the computer reads my
writing and prints it, perhaps with some
photos too. Must also do the promised
book of my relative's poems, or they'll
all die before I've finished!!! ;) Anna

Rula

Rula

12 years 9 months ago

Wow Anna

Great news indeed! Really happy for you.Wish you the best of luck.

Ian.T

Ian.T

12 years 9 months ago

Rula

A lovely cry from such a broken place, I would add an "S" to due on that somewhere around line 9. Though it sounds OK then there is the point that more is owed to that Heart..
Take care and keep writing, Yours Ian.T

Rula

Rula

12 years 9 months ago

Thank you Ian

for reading and leaving that nice comment.
I really too appreciate the suggestion . I shall edit for extra dues (((smiles)))
Really appreciate it .

Ian.T

Ian.T

12 years 9 months ago

I shall send

An emergency mend kit for hearts.
It has plasters of love
and wraps of cuddles
that will soon heal the break.
Then a meeting invitation to a like soul
For you to travel on ,
Yours Ian.T