swan

Member since October 19, 2014

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wit

Posted Oct 19, 2014 · 13 lines · 10 critiques

wit
...
.......
is d shit
that won't fit
in yr everyday coffin

>coughing sound

hey this one's still alive
...
thrive
i
dare
u

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Received a critique
on wit from @Simon Smythe
"it's radical - it's good to be alive - it's ok by me"
October 2014
25 Sat

Received a critique
on wit from @weirdelf
"most welcome to Neopoet. I simply don't accept txt abbreviations as poetry. Not because I am old fashioned or recalcitrant to change but because it lacks clarity of meaning and further, I think is fucking lazy. It's fai…"
21 Tue

Received a critique
on wit from @wesley snow
"I too like the comments. I think many are to the point and from both sides of the discussion: whether or not this is poetry. I am a traditionalist who likes my sonnets and triolets, so you might guess I would consider t…"
19 Sun

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About me

think 4 yrself , here i am , let's create

Location: dunedin, new zealand

Posted: 19 October, 2014

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