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swan
Member since October 19, 2014
Member for 11 years, 7 months
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wit
wit
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.......
is d shit
that won't fit
in yr everyday coffin
>coughing sound
hey this one's still alive
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thrive
i
dare
u
swan’s timeline
- October 2024
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19 SatAnniversary
10 years of membership
- October 2019
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19 SatAnniversary
5 years of membership
- October 2015
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19 MonAnniversary
One year of membership
- November 2014
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07 FriReceived a critique
on wit from @Simon Smythe
"it's radical - it's good to be alive - it's ok by me" - October 2014
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21 TueReceived a critique
on wit from @wesley snow
"I too like the comments. I think many are to the point and from both sides of the discussion: whether or not this is poetry. I am a traditionalist who likes my sonnets and triolets, so you might guess I would consider t…" -
20 Mon
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20 MonReceived a critique
on wit from @themoonman
"Welcome to the site. I'm not sure I'd call this a poem either, it could be the beginning of one. If you expect to be taken seriously, write your words. Hone your craft. If you use an abbreviation like yr(short for year…" -
20 MonReceived a critique
on wit from @Barbara Writes
"Interesting theme and poem structure. Shorthand poetry writing works well for you. I'm not sure who or what 'wit' is. The coughing and coffin clearly bring your subject to life. Great rhyming. The logic I think is sound…" -
20 MonReceived a critique
on wit from @China Blue
"it is called a caret and does mean extended in that direction what I am saying even considering the use of more modern approaches to writing I do not feel this has the fundamentals of a poem" -
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19 SunFirst publication
wit
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19 SunJoined Neopoet
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think 4 yrself , here i am , let's create
Location: dunedin, new zealand
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