sweetspirit

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Sweet Kiss

Posted Aug 26, 2009 · 22 lines · 15 critiques

For I am but a simple soul

Though often unsure of whom I am
Still this I know deep within
without love I am not whole

my love is true and that I’ll not hide
‘Tis only truth I keep inside
because love’s loss I’ve felt once before
because of that

Oh, I will love thee even more

my gift may at first seem small
When I give, I do swear to give my all
For life spent loving not, you see
Is meaningless it seems to me

My gift I offer up to you

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Is my love shall ever be true
all I am is yours to keep
tender love to you I’ll make

Please take my hand release all your cares
And trust that our Goddess will lead us there
Love’s promise then simply is this
Forever feel my softest sweet kiss

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Critiqued
"What You Hold" by @2 Quills
"I love it and I love you~"
December 2009
11 Fri

Received a critique
on ~My Make Believe~ from @Kailashana
"((((((Mark)))))) You're back!!!!!!! Yippee! ~A Don’t let your victories go to your head, or your failures go to your heart."
11 Fri

Received a critique
on ~My Make Believe~ from @mark
"A pleasure to read. Mark "some things change, some things don't""
September 2009
12 Sat

Received a critique
on ~A Midnights Dream~ from @lyz
"Always such beauty in your writing. Speechless you have left me, not, Lol. This is, Exotic, Erotic, Hot and plenty of Love. And I loved it. Lyz XX"
11 Fri

Received a critique
on ~Poets In Time~ from @Seren
"Beautiful"
11 Fri

Received a critique
on ~Poets In Time~ from @lyz
"Could have told me I only gave you 4 stars. How rude, I really love to read your work and this was meant to have 5 * so I'm back and now I am gone. Ha. lyz XX"
09 Wed

Received a critique
on ~My Make Believe~ from @lyz
"Beautifully written, sad to read, make believe or not, the loneliness and yearning in this write pulled at my heartstrings. You know how to write them. Loved it. Lyz XX"
08 Tue

Received a critique
on Thought You Should Know from @mantiscepter
"Hey Sweetspirit. how are you? I guess this would be complete and utter, submission to a higher power,acceptance with no accolades, other, than the touch of each. I loved this , it was exceptional. Mantiscepter"
08 Tue

Received a critique
on Thought You Should Know from @lyz
"So aptly named. Now this is love. How beautiful, so vivid.I can see u looking into each others eyes and declaring without a blink. I loved This Love story. Love Lyz XX"
01 Tue

Critiqued
"~" by @2 Quills
"awww..yes my dear..life is a big mystery and one never knows whats around the rivers bend.. nuzzles, me"
August 2009
30 Sun

Critiqued
"~" by @2 Quills
"There is truly no words that can describe the feelings That overtake me when I read these words then And now to once again read them for these words You wrote before we ever laid in our Eternal bed..And now just as then…"
29 Sat

Critiqued
"Hide Your Face (Offensive Language/Violence)" by @Seren
"(((laughing))) uncontrollably on the floor...girl!!! I am so sorry that your precious items were taken but to put it too words like this is awesome. I love fiesty;) Good luck on your trip to the hospital hope all turns…"
29 Sat

Critiqued
"Dream a Little." by @lyz
"I think you just post the orignal the way you intended and just mark it *adult* this is too beautiful to be censored. Fav lines are: On wings of Pegasus you fly to me, In dream’s of slumber, my fantasy. With arms entwin…"
29 Sat

Critiqued
"Paned Sorrow" by @Seren
"Lady you did wonderfully sad with this piece. Sometimes our feelings seep out like molasses from a mason jar dark and delicious. I do love this in a twisted way one because its a beautiful write secondly because its par…"
26 Wed

Critiqued
"To the Last Drop" by @Seren
"I love this the best out of all I have read of yours..and I think I have read all on your page ;) I too love the fantasy, that is where my heart is..I love the happy go lucky ones and the dark and mysterious ones.. It r…"
26 Wed

Critiqued
"Spit On Your Name (Adult content) Offensive Language" by @Bosscombat
"I'll give ya 5 stars because I love it..I love when the a man stands up and sticks up for the woman he loves..is sassy, its bold and just down right sexy!! Thumbs up!! Jen"
26 Wed

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15 critiques to date.
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Sweet Kiss
"For I am but a simple soul"
Open thread 22 lines
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August 2009 — 8 poems
13 Thu

Posted a poem
~Poets In Time~
" "
Open thread 20 lines
11 Tue

Posted a poem
~A Midnights Dream~
"Below and all around my cauldron"
Open thread 55 lines
09 Sun

Posted a poem
Thought You Should Know
" I was disillusioned, empty inside"
Open thread 39 lines
06 Thu

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~She Who Is Me~
"~She Who Is Me~"
Open thread 41 lines
02 Sun

Posted a poem
~My Make Believe~
"Welcome to my land of Make-Believe...."
Open thread 18 lines
01 Sat

Posted a poem
~I Am~
"I am like a small child"
Open thread 37 lines
July 2009
23 Thu

Posted a poem
~Spirit of the Wolf~
"My soul is poisoned by these wretched chains"
Open thread 27 lines
22 Wed

First critique offered
on "~" by @2 Quills
21 Tue

First publication
~My Pen~
21 Tue

Posted a poem
~My Pen~
"My Pen leaks onto the paper"
Open thread 16 lines
18 Sat

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"What You Hold" by @2 Quills

on ~My Make Believe~ from @Kailashana

on ~My Make Believe~ from @mark

on ~A Midnights Dream~ from @lyz

on ~Poets In Time~ from @Seren

on ~Poets In Time~ from @lyz

on ~My Make Believe~ from @lyz

on Thought You Should Know from @mantiscepter

on Thought You Should Know from @lyz

"~" by @2 Quills

"~" by @2 Quills

"Hide Your Face (Offensive Language/Violence)" by @Seren

"Dream a Little." by @lyz

"Paned Sorrow" by @Seren

"To the Last Drop" by @Seren

"Spit On Your Name (Adult content) Offensive Language" by @Bosscombat

August 2009 — 8 poems

on "~" by @2 Quills

Membership begins

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