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Luis p. Son
Member since May 11, 2026
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Intoxicating wind
Apricot,
ribboned sky
tropical.
Waves,
heated ply
desertian.
Sirocco carrying sheets of words
My jaw unhinged speaks my melodies
drying, cycling to moisture, spine gives
steel strings accompanying crackle
steadfast sparks like fireworks around.
Smoke,
hazy eyes
emberian.
Shrine,
palms' highs
astral.
Luis p. Son’s timeline
- May 2026
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13 WedCritiqued
"Learning Bicycle" by @Sen99
"I felt like you might have chased for rhymes a bit too much? Anyhow, pretty interesting with the self deprecation and anxiety. The "learning how to ride the bike" part could be some sort of fear of performance or vulner…" -
13 WedFirst critique offered
on "Learning Bicycle" by @Sen99
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13 WedReceived a critique
on Intoxicating wind from @Geezer
"I have to agree, that if what you had intended was to leave the ending as an astral focused conclusion, you have succeeded. I am a resolution kind of guy, so for all purpose, whatever reason you chose to end it that way…" -
13 Wed
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11 MonReceived a critique
on Sailing Time from @Geezer
"you have gotten it right for the sailors out there. I have only been sailing once and it was during very unsettled weather, so not a pleasant experience, but I can see how it might be a serene kind of thing to do. Nice…" -
11 MonFirst publication
Sailing Time
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11 Mon
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11 MonJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
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Inspired by words and thoughts.
Striving to always find balance.
Location: ITA
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