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1738mary0miller
Member since May 14, 2026
Member for 4 days
My Last Rhyme
Thoughts of you fill my everyday,
So many things left for me to say.
This is harder than I thought it would be,
But before you go I need you to see me.
We've never been close, never had the perfect mother-daughter relationship,
You tried your hardest to be a Mom so hip.
I remember all the times we would argue and fight,
And in the end, "most of the time, " you were right.
Whenever I needed you, you were always there,
Even though I was mean to you, you showed me you did care.
I remember all the good times and the bad,
Most of my acts ended up being a fad.
There are moments in time I wished I could take back,
But the past i can't erase, for it's already fact.
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In your time of weakness, I'm here for you holding strong,
Seems like I've been absent, but I've been right beside you all along.
Three more words come to mind,
"I love you, " to hear it again, just push rewind.
In this day and in this time,
Mom, I give to you my last rhyme.
1738mary0miller’s timeline
- May 2026
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17 SunReceived a critique
on My Last Rhyme from @Geezer
"A raw, complete story. I think the meter could be readjusted and smoothed out, so that what you get is a sing-song poem that is easy to say. Easy to say means a lot of things; it means that your tongue doesn't get twist…" -
17 Sun
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15 FriNew follower
@Clentin
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14 ThuReceived a critique
on God In The Front Seat from @Geezer
"of one of those old cartoons where the Devil is on one shoulder and an angel on the other. I think that you might find the rhythm a little better, by making the lines more of equal meter, maybe even combining two lines…" -
14 ThuFirst publication
God In The Front Seat
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14 ThuPosted a poem
God In The Front Seat
"Through our life we have traveled down miles of by-ways and highways, " -
14 ThuJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
Hi my name is Mary Miller I am 49 years old. I have been writing poetry since I was in 8th grade and have written over 160 poems. I have 6 published, 1 in the United Kingdom. I just recently had my 6th one published, will be out on June 11th.
Location: USA
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