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Jun 26, 2013
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THAT SMILE
That smile
that penetrates the senses,
inflames the mind,
is seen behind the face, in mirrored thoughts,
a mirage in the sky or on the lake,
within the sound
of a singing bird,
it's message is of joy,
of sheer abandon,
when all the trappings of the chores of day,
repeated like a dirge,
take wings
and catch a cacophony of feelings and sensations,
lying latent in each man,
awakened to the paradise
of freedom of expression,
an impression of a hand upon the sensitive disguise,
when eye meets eye
and throws all cares away
we live with ecstasy, another day.
— Nordic cloud, Jun 26, 2013
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Style/Type: Free verse
Editing Stage: Rough draft
Critiques
Rula
12 years 11 months ago
another great read dear Anna!!
I too learned some new voc.
As usual I enjoyed
and especially liked
"catch a cacophony of feelings and sensations,"
Nothing to suggest
Nordic cloud
12 years 11 months ago
Thank you dear Rula, love Ann
Thank you dear Rula, love Ann.
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