2020

Quarantined wishes
masked dreams, and more coffined plans
Death is everywhere

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

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Comments

Rula

5 years 3 months ago

Dear Mark

Can't thank you enough for passing by with these encouraging words. Always appreciated!

Geezer

5 years 3 months ago

At first...

I thought that you meant confined plans, but then I understood; coffined plans, a double meaning?
~ Geezer.
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Rula

5 years 3 months ago

Thank you Gee

Inspired by everything goes around, I thought coffined goes well with masks and quarantines, hope that that makes sense.

Gracy

5 years 3 months ago

Good one, I don't know whether this is a special form, but I'd suggest your turning it into 4 lines. An idea to TorT, of course.
BTW, do you all see my poems and comments, because Gee says I'm posting in a place where only I can see the poems. Please let me know because it's become an issue. I don't see anywhere else to post. Tx

Rula

5 years 3 months ago

Hello Gracy

So happy to see you on my page.your comment is v. much welcomed.
To answer your question, this is a 5_7_5 haiku form though not a haiku theme I guess
Many thanks