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Dec 10, 2023
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2023 New Year's Image Prompt
It has been a roller-coaster ride
This Slip stream mounted slide
Oft' times we must partake and abide
Out with the olden days
Let us come out of the haze
with a well turned phrase
On the appointed hour raise
your voices and glasses in praise
As we promise new ways in coming days
Let there be lilting mirth
raise your voices high
on the eve of our rebirth!
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