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May 01, 2014
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'hark my heart stops
stress stalks me
I sweat helplessly....
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Ian.T
11 years 2 months ago
Loved
Though my heart doth beat strongly
Your words fell short as title displayed
If thou doth require correction
Pray take to you my words:-
Hark my heart doth stop
stress stalks me on silent wings
I sweat helplessly.
Love to our one Loved
That he should toil unaided
When our help is nigh,
Yours Ian.T
loved
11 years 2 months ago
great vision
tis best to traverse
on known sands
than walk across drier grass ...
I shall limit to my hall of fame
lest I earn greater ...defame
emeka ozurumba
11 years 2 months ago
lovely mingling
lovely mingling
loved
11 years 2 months ago
thanks
we mingle to gingle
Rula
11 years 2 months ago
Loved this from both of you
Loved this from both of you dear friends.
weirdelf
11 years 1 month ago
I can relate to that.
I can relate to that.
loved
11 years 1 month ago
that you can
makes me smile
Sir Jess