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Dec 07, 2017
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An Abdication:
Masquerade undone
Illusive victory won
Moral power gone
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Uncommented
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
weirdelf
7 years 6 months ago
This is a total success in your self-imposed rigid genre.
The 'Last few words' were un-needed, your eight words said it.
OriginalRhyku
7 years 5 months ago
Last few words removed
Jess / Weirdelf
I have acceded to your fine review and appreciate your appreciation of my middling musings.
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