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May 18, 2016
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ABOUT CANDLES AND FLAMES
ABOUT CANDLES AND FLAMES
A flame that flickers in the night
endures the winds that would
extinguish its light.
but until the fire dies to itself
It is fire still up to the time
it burns no more.
we are candles lit that sear
the universe with our fire
week or strong
and as long as one cinder burns
the inimitable soul will continue to glow…
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
jane210660
9 years 1 month ago
I like the positivity in this
I like the positivity in this. I think your inimitable (love that word) soul is still burning bright, even if it is a bit flickery.
Jx
Geremia
9 years 1 month ago
yes, indeed !
yes, indeed !
lovedly
9 years 1 month ago
see what a difference it makes
when negativity
changes to positivity
candles glow
as the whirl-winds
do continue to blow
and
in this piece Joe
you show!
Geremia
9 years 1 month ago
the mind changes as the day
the mind changes as the day goes./
Keith Logan
9 years 1 month ago
Try again and see if once more the software breaks
I see the last line more like
the peerless soul continues to glow.