Candlewitch

Jul 14, 2022 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

About You...

something in the way

you take my hand

caress my cheek

gaze into my eyes

breathe my name

kiss my throat

fondle my nape...

we undulate

oscillate

modulate

tangled limbs

of a work in progress

Something about you causes

my mouth to dry

breath to catch

pulse to race

body to sing...

The chorus

of the music of our souls

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Northwestern Wisconsin USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe, William Blake, Bob Dylan, Tom Petty, Carlos Castaneda, Jim Morrison, the whole of Neopoet and many more.

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Comments

Geezer

3 years ago

I love your title...

The story told is a one of love and unity with another. Excellent pace and word usage. ~ Geez.
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Candlewitch

3 years ago

guess who I wrote it for? LOL

I'm listening to the guess who right now...
thank you for always being supportive of my work! you are a true friend!

*love & hugs, Cat

Mr joghe

3 years ago

I love the title.

I love the title.
The poem is about two lovers that felt the warmth of their bodies when they were together.

Candlewitch

2 years 12 months ago

thank you Mr. Joghe,

you are right.

always, Cat

Rosewood Apothecary

2 years 12 months ago

Title

It’s great. I’m late getting on tonight. But yeah!!

Candlewitch

2 years 12 months ago

thanks Tim!

you don't mean to tell me, that you have a life outside of Neopoet? lol

*hugs, Cat

RoseBlack

2 years 12 months ago

Love everything about this

The title, the flow, the story...all wonderful!

Candlewitch

2 years 12 months ago

thank you RoseB. I appreciate

thank you RoseB. I appreciate your reading and commenting :)

*hugs, Cat

Jackweb

2 years 12 months ago

Tender romantic poetry

and erotic love verse. Generally short and graceful in form and typically dealing with themes of love and affection.

Beautifully penned piece!
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Candlewitch

2 years 12 months ago

thank you Onyinechi!

I appreciate your comments!

*hugs, Cat

Seren

2 years 4 months ago

Dearest One

This reminded me of two souls dancing around each other an attracted like magnets. I think it is an absolute cracking poem. I love the title it suits the poem. I think this would make for some amazing lyrics!!!

Yep I went back in time again

Brava!!!

Love you always Lilbit xxx