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Above the Sky Poetry Does Fly

Above the sky my poetry flies
over heads standing that high
where even eagles fail to fly

To send my poetry that high
my mortality does die

I recall the past as remembrance
some say reminiscence
at times we humans
really make no sense
elevate those
who promote nonsense

is that the beginning of life
some say 'tis life's substance
concentrated essence
Isn't such a version
sheer nonsense

someone say with confidence
poetry is just sharing virtual emotion

About This Poem

Last Few Words: After digesting so many meaningless poems this is just an abstract of read nonsense Are we simulated auto poets

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

Triskelion

Triskelion

3 years 4 months ago

Don't forget

the parallel spirits joined by the primal elements. This is the lovedly I know and wait to read.
The title is most intriguing.

Thomas

lovedly

lovedly

3 years 4 months ago

Thanks GEE

BEYOND THE SKIES YOU PRAISE ME
I STILL AND WILL LIVE
YOUR GOOD WISHES
I LIVE

Triskelion

Triskelion

3 years 4 months ago

Now why

would you change a perfectly intriguing title?

lovedly

lovedly

3 years 4 months ago

Hello

No one was reading this poem so had to change its dress slightly tho

Triskelion

Triskelion

3 years 4 months ago

I must say

The original title piqued my interest much more. The new title basically sums up the whole piece. We should vote to see who wants the new title, or the old title. Anyone else want to weigh in?

Thomas

lovedly

lovedly

3 years 4 months ago

YOU MAY ASK SOME POETIC FIGURE HEADS HERE

Scribbler RAY Mark Michael RACE_9TOGO
AND SOME NEW bees ...We could -perhaps have better interaction on
TITLES
Paul may be requested to float his views too.
Thanks to all