ABSOLUTE

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "ABSOLUTE" explores themes of inner turmoil, betrayal, and the struggle for identity. The imagery of being devoured by silence and torn at the seams conveys a sense of inner conflict and vulnerability. The reference to swearing allegiance to lies and broken ties suggests a theme of deception and disillusionment.

The poem transitions into a reflection on a lost sense of self and a disconnect from humanity. The contrast between peace and war, love and hate, highlights the complexity of human emotions and experiences. The imagery of gnawing at the bone and being burnt as a seed adds a layer of metaphorical depth to the poem.

Overall, the poem effectively conveys a sense of inner struggle and existential questioning. The use of vivid imagery and introspective language enhances the emotional impact of the piece. Consider further exploring the themes introduced in the poem to deepen the reader's engagement with the subject matter.

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Hello, ziggy,
The enjambment, the language, the pace, the title... this is a gem!

A couple typos (I believe):
"sworn legions too / to..."
"...a single persona that lost it's / its..."

Also, "I that" should be correctly stated as, "I who..." ("that" is for things, and "who" is for whomans, er, humans.) :)

Really enjoyed this, more and more after several reads.
Thank you!
L