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Dec 06, 2013
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Abstract Fiasco
novice painters
bend and twitch
a castle,
a kiss,
a face turned two
the master's glare
turns the screws
'neath Picasso's umbrella
....bliss twists to blue
disjointed dreams
drip and fade
as bereted visions
meet
the light of day
and only the elerly laugh
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
Roscoe Lane
11 years 7 months ago
If you,
If you wish to search for genius, first prepare for scorn. Beautifully writen. Regards Roscoe..