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silent_voice_84
Jan 11, 2012 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

acceptence (prose)

Indigo children, running on a molten river of emotionless hate.
Driven forwards only by the tumult that we fools call love.
Compelled only to be accepted into a perfect circle.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: I have a couple of rough drafts for verses two and three, will upload over the next week or so.

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Bristol, GBR

Favorite Poets: My great friend Craig Walters, a long time friend of mine who composes original and heart warming poetry and music, and he has always been a great teacher and opened my third eye to some great literature. Along side Craig our close friend the musicianDylan Thompson has inspired a lot of what I write with his loyalty, acerbic wit, and with the music he has led me on on love., And the surrealist writer and poet Chris Foster, who's poems and stories are an inspiration, as is his friendship., I believe in the power of the spoken and written word and as such am really fortunate to have the circle of friends that I do. Most of my friends are musicians also and this lends itself in the construction of my songs and poems., Stephen King. Hunter.S.Thompson. Aldous Huxley. Edward Bunker. , Aleister Crowley. Dante Alghieri. Voltaire. Carl Jung. Dylan Thomas.

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

13 years 9 months ago

Hello silent_voice

This is more a piece of prose rather than poetry. But since we don't have a selection for prose, you might want to put it in your title, like this:

Acceptence (prose)

I recently did that with my latest piece, titled: Brave Hearts (prose) as someone rightly pointed out to me that it wasn't poetry. You can click on my name, Candlewitch, to get to my page.

I really like your opening line:

Indigo children, running on a molten river of emotionless hate.

it is very descriptive and full of emotion and dark imagery. I love dark works and write mine under the name of eddy styx (in the title of my poems) I look forward to reading more of your work.

Again, welcome to the site.

always, Cat