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Jan 14, 2012
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Acclimate
I see her hidden
in plan sight
hands pressed
to her eyes
this image remains
among few
a day that won't wake up
I slide into a pocket
fortified against drafts
About This Poem
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
IKnowNoBox
13 years 6 months ago
Thank you,
In ink.
David
IKnowNoBox
13 years 6 months ago
thqnk you Mark
in ink,
David