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Jan 14, 2019
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Addiction
one more sip
one more shot
one more hit,
of that pot.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: 16 days sober
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
weirdelf
6 years 6 months ago
I am going to have to go back to some of your more recent works
To see your real work. I know how good you can be.
Honestly, there is not much said here and not much to say about it.