After Nighttime Snowfall

Black morning stillness
icy calm speaks dark reproach
shadows this landscape

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Meh

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: U.S.A., USA

Favorite Poets: Emily Dickinson, Robert Frost, Walt Whitman. I’m enamored by the work of lyricists such as Robert Hunter, John Barlow, John Dyer Baizley, and Tom Marshall just to name a handful.

Comments

RoseBlack

2 years 5 months ago

Haiku

Makes me think of dark, early mornings following a winter storm. There is an icy calm that follows. Well done.

Seren

2 years 5 months ago

Dear Tim

You're a master at pulling at the senses, this is a brilliant Haiku dark and foreboding,

This is brilliantly executed.

I wish I could convey how much this has affected me tonight, I've had a day.

Kind regards Jayne

Lightning Dust

2 years 5 months ago

Hi Rosewood Apothecary

Masterfully written. I freaking love this!

Candlewitch

2 years 5 months ago

dear Tim,

beautifully dark grey...you have made every word count! almost ethereal! I love it!

* hugs, Cat

Rosewood Apothecary

2 years 5 months ago

I am a little shocked at the response

I had a tough time with this one. I’ve revised it like 6 times. I am really glad you all liked it. I felt it was mediocre but usually if I post something that needs work you guys tell me so. Ha, well I guess it’s acceptable. It’s definitely coherent.

Thanks for reading,
Tim