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After the quartet

After the quartet:

As one long note, bowed to thinning silence,

We politely held applause, watched these magicians

Who flout all laws of natural science,

And float above our quiet adulation.

We got home, drawn of emotion, that such

Profound things as these could be given

To a silence that filled an empty hall before,

Then put the radio on, in the want of more.

We listened to Chopin and the rain as ever

Poured, in this neck of wood, strummed, lapping

Ceaseless - almost, then came perceived calm,

I realized, of course, it was the audience clapping;

Matching the rain in it’s random pattern,

And indistinguishable from the downpour

After the last and finest thinning note

Had been lightly given, to rain, to listener

And all who adored, endured, held scores

By degrees we soared, then fell like sopranos,

From warm to cold, to cease,

In the freezing seethe that grips us

Heart-held , astonished after an old song

Had ebbed, loved, watched learned,

And left the audience cold, in space

Yet within, fired and in spite of all weather

Yearning to stay in that time, that flow, in place.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Poem submitted to ABC radio Australia. Not pushed it out anywhere (I think).

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Tasmania, AUS

Favorite Poets: Glen Richards, Thomas Hardy, Phillip Larkin, Robert Frost, William Carlos Williams, Carol Ann Duffy , Ani DiFranco, Seamus Heaney, Emily Dickinson, T. S. Elliot

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Comments

Ruby Lord

Ruby Lord

5 months 3 weeks ago

What a lovely detailed and

What a lovely detailed and imaginative way to describe a musical performance. I loved the way you used the rain and the audience to tie the experience together. It really made me sense the music you were listening to. Ruby xxx :)

vandiemenspeak

vandiemenspeak

4 months 4 weeks ago

Thank you.

As I mentioned to Lavender, I have been a bit preoccupied, so sorry for the late reply. I will certainly have a look at your work. Thanks for the feedback, take care,

Chris

Lavender

Lavender

5 months 3 weeks ago

After the Quartet

I like the build up in this. A crescendo, not only in the actual music, which is well imagined here, but also in you. The feeling of joy and adoration is so nicely described. The title is perfect, leaving us to understand the delight will be felt for a very long time.
Thank you!
Lavender

vandiemenspeak

vandiemenspeak

4 months 4 weeks ago

Glad you enjoyed!

It was a great night, a couple of years ago. I will get back into reading and commenting l. Thanks again, take care,

Chris