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Jun 02, 2023
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Against the wall
Collectively cornered
against
the wall
while all my
thickening thoughts
begins to
fall into
A reticently
rambling refrain.
Erratically
rustling
through that
perilous
passageway.
Where every
faint flicker
in the dense
dwellings
of the dark
Just decides
to fade away.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Lavender
2 years 1 month ago
Against The Wall
Hello, Edward,
I feel the anxiety here, from the title to the amazing final two lines.
Always good to see your unique, wonderful work.
L
Edward nigma
2 years 1 month ago
Thank you
I was inspired to write this by the song the edges of the world from fun home.
Which gave me the image of man who is delicately dwindling into a downfall.
https://youtu.be/in_ZRAguDLQ
Lavender
2 years 1 month ago
Describes the feeling...
very well!
L