age is just a number

smile and love age is just a number

His un-surpassable
tooth less smile
try and beat it

a lovely rainbow bird
always a perpetual rainbow
come rain or snow

from a journalists point of view
all is relative
even
among relatives

I see beauty first
it quenches my thirst
as I am deaf and partially blind
age of anyone I don't ever mind

I have to make amends...
.with like minded aged friends...

all is relative says the master

my love for all
who
read me also
even though at times
for me now the bell chimes

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

Sparrow

9 years 1 month ago

Loved

There in the distance rings the bell of the universe, it brings to all those who are wary a rest, you have much to do and this write is part of all those things you need to portray to others.
There is no hiding place for those that seek oblivion they make waves in your time that can be seen as clear as an image in a mirror.
A grand write there young Bard now seek out the keys that will bring the thoughts of the universe to the many,
Yours as always Ian..
.
Seem to be auto writing, maybe there's a clear thought in there some place lol

AMOGELANG MOKOBANE

9 years ago

the words are refreshing also

the words are refreshing also explaining the effect of thoughts led out by the poet
.
age is just a number
who should be in thoughts
come think
I am about a prank
with all to have drank
age is just a number

mand

9 years ago

Hi there

Wise words - love is the key!

As always you make me think and ponder! :)

Love Mand xxxx

lovedly

9 years ago

my mission mand

is to sharpen mundane
and dull sleepy minds