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Nov 20, 2014
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Age (prose poem)
A paper moth strung from a candy gloss vellum embossed with micro pastel flowers and autographed library ISBS scanned in constellate ions of hypnopomp.
About This Poem
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Esker
10 years 8 months ago
hypnopomp
scanner.....adjust..file..forget...
like eyes in the mall
on the bus
love...
see what we think we like to want
and get it...
does it make happiness
or is it just another hypnotist
showering us with praise
to sweep into the collection
Love the Hypnopomp line
excellent!
thank you!
quillsveinback
10 years 7 months ago
And thank you
You are a discerning commentator
zebra
6 years 6 months ago
Im reading your surreal poems
Im reading your surreal poems with hungry eyes, digesting, my brain is pregnant with standing ovulations ;O