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age with time Lady Grace

of aging

the principle cause
of aging

is the very fear
of aging

that’s a
natural phenomenon

so relax
you will
surely age
don’t have a rage,
but do age
gracefully
not hastily

but gracefully
you must leave the stage
without any rage,
for those who are
younger in age.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

Comments

BlueDemon77

11 years 10 months ago

Thanks loved

Strong poem but not in the line of the workshop. We had several options to choose from as a challenge. Forgive me if I'm wrong but this doesn't represent any of the forms, ideas, or topics addressed in the workshop.

Ron

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11 years 10 months ago

I have not joined any workshop this is just another one of

my trash ones

Ian.T

11 years 10 months ago

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I know I is old, and fear not, so why is I becoming older ???LOL
I think that a little adjustment to the words on this one.
The poem "Desiderata" is a fine piece of writing, are you familiar with it,
I don't mean touchy feely but the words LOL
A good write there it seems to be an abridged version of that.
Take care young Bard, not sure what Ron was talking about,
Yours Ian.T

loved

11 years 10 months ago

i don't read much poetry but

as you know
compose off the cuff
I however take ur words
as a compliment
or should i??

this poem on aging
i composed in 2010
on another site
which now I'm clearing

Ian.T

11 years 10 months ago

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Three years and it hasn't aged one minute,
that's time Sojourn's for you..
Have a great day young Bard,
Yours Ian

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11 years 10 months ago

you meant sojourn for me ... didn't you

and
you now say
I'm hard as stone
a rock jutted into the soaring sea
rather,
snoring sea...
that's me

mand

11 years 10 months ago

Definatley going to take your

Definatley going to take your advise from now on! Less rage - less old age. Sounds like a win, win situation.

Your poems are always intriquing - and I always learn a little something each time I visit.

Keep safe

Love Mand xxxxxx

loved

11 years 10 months ago

thanks Mand...U R

definitely
welcome to take my
advice
and thanks for saying so ;publicly..