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AGELESS LOVE
She wakes beside me every day
and stumbles from our bed
her hair all mussed, eyes full of sleep
she's lovely as the day we wed
Though many years have passed us now
my hair has grown both scarce and white
when I see her I still behold
the girl I met one summer night
And I still like to look at her
she makes me laugh and smile
when I tire and my bones ache
for her I'll go on for a while
When oft' I gaze into bright eyes
I still become quite lost
and wonder why she's stayed so long
no matter what the cost
And as the years pile up on me
with her I'll live my life
and always see the girl within
my never aging wife
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rula
6 years 4 months ago
Hats off
to all the loyal wives and to the loyal husbands too.
An enjoyable read Stan.
scribbler
6 years 4 months ago
Hi Rula
I keep trying to figure out why she keeps me around lol. Thanks for coming by
Geezer
6 years 4 months ago
Probably because...
she sees you the same way! I really enjoyed this, you always help me see the best of our older years.
~ Gee.
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scribbler
6 years 4 months ago
Hi Gee
It's a good thing there Are good parts of getting old, lord knows there's enough bad involved lol
Rula
6 years 4 months ago
Maybe because
You're a poet?(Smiles)
scribbler
6 years 4 months ago
ME?
a poet? Well a scribbler at best but thanks for saying so