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Jul 28, 2011
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~air of contentment
the heart of a woman
is deeply rooted
like a wild violet
and to know
the way berries warm inside a
hand
to watch vines unfold a thousand
blossoms
see poppies spread wide
open
to know this
is the only wisdom
worth knowing
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Ink Artist
13 years 11 months ago
thanks
from what i know personally of wild violets in my area, they have a very dense, fibrous root system. that seemed like a good metaphor to the heart of a woman! thanks for stopping in for a read! :)
~lori
Dalton
13 years 11 months ago
Nice one Ink Artist
I think its wonderful for a female poet to articulate what it is to be a woman. Especially for a man's edification.
John