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All In

Oh blissfull day
that's come my way,
it's good to be at home!

It took som time
to make this rhyme,
I had to write it on the roam;

creative sparks emits my dome.

~

Morning delight
it just feels right,
'tis nice to be alive;

on words I feed
to fill my need,
even shadows wish to thrive;

alive in sunlight they try and strive.

~

Good day, kind sirs
things could be worse,
as night becoes from day;

night's skies await
the perptude of fate,
shadows dwnse, so the odds can sway;

all in ! For the perpetual day !

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Let me have it !

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Comments

Rula

Rula

13 years ago

Good morning docmaverick

It is sure nice to be alive
and read your words
today!

yesterday is a past , today is present , the future is unknown
so let's live the day

Loved this for its simplicity . it reads even like a prayer

Enjoyed the read indeed
Have a nice day sir.

Ian.T

Ian.T

13 years ago

Doc

A good Morning to you,
There seems to be a lot of spelling things that came in with the sunrise,
great to read your fun runs,
Yours Ian.T