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Jun 25, 2019
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All Alone Prima Poetry stage 2
alone in the darkness
thick forest
on an empty trail...
A cabin overgrown
a little girl
this grassy town...
beyond the prairie
open field
Darkness falls...
a path through the trees
dark blue skies
light came forth
the end of the grassy road...
a light brighter than day
opened the way
to leave the woods...
into the expanse
the cosmos
from whence I came...
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
5 years 12 months ago
This...
made me feel as though I were alongside you watching the night turn to day! Geezer.
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Barbara Writes
5 years 12 months ago
thanks Jess
glad for the invitation..to do something knew and fun
Barbara Writes
5 years 12 months ago
thanks Jess
glad for the invitation..to do something knew and fun
Barbara Writes
5 years 12 months ago
thanks geezer
i can see you alongside me watching in my minds eye..
weirdelf
5 years 12 months ago
Wonderful Barbara
You've successfully used the trance as a tool.
Sparrow
5 years 11 months ago
Barbara
I have read both parts, these two could be expanded
Take the thoughts and walk with them to another level, Yours as always Ian xx
Barbara Writes
5 years 11 months ago
Thanks
I’ll see I’m sure I could