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Primal Poetry

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All Alone Prima Poetry stage 2

alone in the darkness
thick forest
on an empty trail...

A cabin overgrown
a little girl
this grassy town...

beyond the prairie
open field
Darkness falls...

a path through the trees
dark blue skies
light came forth
the end of the grassy road...

a light brighter than day
opened the way
to leave the woods...

into the expanse
the cosmos
from whence I came...

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

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Geezer

Geezer

5 years 12 months ago

This...

made me feel as though I were alongside you watching the night turn to day! Geezer.
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Sparrow

Sparrow

5 years 11 months ago

Barbara

I have read both parts, these two could be expanded
Take the thoughts and walk with them to another level, Yours as always Ian xx