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Aug 15, 2018
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All Falls
Ringa ringa roses etc
then all fall down
so do all kids
then we have Niagara
Falls
and
when guys grow bigger
night falls
and
when we fall out of love
everything crashes
and
falls
Kings fall
Queens fall
indiscreet women fall
stray guys fall
lovers and cheaters fall
what is this life for
if all are subject to
only
FALLS
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
raj
6 years 11 months ago
liked the multiple falls you
liked the multiple falls you captured in this poem...however there is another side "rise" so it's not apt to say that everything falls in this world...
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lovedly
6 years 11 months ago
every thing raj
does rise as we learn with our woody bodies
but then all rises also
mostly end up in falls
either by corruption or interference
no one lets a risen one fly high and say
O help in his demise
ere he alone does rise
thanks for the immediate surprise
I take it as a prize
raj
6 years 11 months ago
as you wanted me to do...here
as you wanted me to do...here is my attempt to have a one liner for "fall"
F a l l is relatively the lowest point in a cycle from where to rise, like from ocean to clouds
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lovedly
6 years 11 months ago
wonderful excellent
superb
from where else can one rise;
after the night (does) fall
tyro
6 years 11 months ago
ok, my one liner
To fall is to lose control, like falling in love.
lovedly
6 years 11 months ago
ok
every fall as a different meaning