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Geremia

Aug 10, 2012 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

ALL THE KING'S HORSES

ALL THE KING’S HORSES

whirling dervish in a spin
far from the world I live in.
a sudden fall.
sparkling mirrors
of Murano
all
in refraction
a thousand broken
pieces I see
of me.

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: USA

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M

12 years 11 months ago

Joe!!

How are you my friend? I am happy to see you here and missed reading your work. I hope all is going well for you and thought about you the other day wondered how you were doing. I am happy to see you here. God Bless you friend. Long lost Mona:)

I like your poem here!!

12 years 11 months ago

Thanks, Mona. Good to see YOU

Thanks, Mona. Good to see YOU.

M

12 years 11 months ago

Same here

Joe and I see you are actively writing again which is great. I came in today to see how everyone is

12 years 11 months ago

Always good to hear from you-

Always good to hear from you--as many times as you want :)

Thanks,

Joe

12 years 11 months ago

Excellent, pithy and effective

This is an example of the title totally enhancing the poem.

12 years 11 months ago

Yes, you said that about my

Yes, you said that about my last poem. I realzed how the title explains so succinctly the body of poem without writing further verses to clarify.

thanks, mate :)

Joe