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lovedly
lovedly
Jul 24, 2015 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

all for love

She yearns for L O V E

Your first love....
As you say
has gone away....
left you loving astray.....

recalling on hay!
have another one from today...
so many loves in this poem...
read by so many
just ...do away

love is sweet
when you say
love me just once

but love be true o boy
what a lovely joy

what will I ever do without you?
You alone are my life long beau

My sweetest heart
''I love you...'''

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

alidzain

alidzain

9 years 11 months ago

simpld

and yet very likeable. hmm though I wonder what Stan would say about repeating the ''love'' word many times.

Alid

Sparrow

Sparrow

9 years 11 months ago

Loved

Loved the love, where love seemed to love itself.
Love is supreme love is pure love is just love.
Now Unconditional love is another love, this love is eternally loved, a spiritual thing loved by all in love with all,
Yours loved, love, Ian..Lol
Lots of Love
NO it's Lots of Laughs
Ask our PM

lovedly

lovedly

9 years 11 months ago

love is your love... by this Loved

Love is your love... by this Loved
all is love
even when one is harsh
love is meant to convey happiness
all its lovely way
but when one repeats
love, love and love
again and again
it places on one’s mind
a damn strain

does he love me?
alas in vain
none the less
loves come in
let it flow from without to within

love is he who is lovely
and loved by this sweet bard
called Lovedly

can you still, love this egoistic
self seeking one
Jess may call a bastard
whiner
what the fucks
wants this loved one
only love
like an eight year old damsel
with legs above
as says my master’s voice
love now you may rejoice.

weirdelf

weirdelf

9 years 11 months ago

Cloy

One of your worst and badly written.

Repetetition can be effective, but not the word 'love'. it is almost as bad as the word 'beautiful'.