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Aug 14, 2016
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THE ALL TOO HUMAN
THE ALL TOO HUMAN
There is an inexplicable and mysterious essence
within us that makes us rise above ourselves
in our darkest moments of despair as our life
draws near to finality: a scintilla of promise
washes over us to disclaim doubt and fear.
there is much yet to learn of the ways
of God and Nature yet our heart and mind
are stricken with disbelief and we lose count
of the treasures of Creation
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lovedly
8 years 11 months ago
Joe you are now
the greatest poet of a
Darker Era
but the brightest
as of now
as you singularly
traverse
the path of loneliness
composing
DARKENED
melodies
how so ever
dark may they be
but poetry is what is
this....
lovedly
8 years 11 months ago
i know you don't read but read this Loved they say is a Monkey
Comparing'' Loved to a Monkey.......''
Let him be my master
Esker
I only guys humour...
MONKEY he knows
are intelligent
and
the two of you take time
to discuss such a
FOOL!
Never mind Loved's too cool
passed age of some of you
may be most!
Standing at the edge
of the cliff of time
like Joe,
sooner than later
LOVED
too will not chime
there may be no more
rhyme
lime
and
sublime
as he lays
in hands of Divine!!!!
with Loved all is fine...
alidzain
8 years 11 months ago
joe
Good job! Keep writing.
Alid
lovedly
8 years 11 months ago
good
alidz
jane210660
8 years 10 months ago
I love this, I find it deeply
I love this, I find it deeply comforting. Jxx
Keith Logan
8 years 10 months ago
Good poem
on a difficult subject but clear and concise. My only suggestion for change would be to drop the first "us" in line two.
jane210660
8 years 10 months ago
Missed that but now Keith has
Missed that but now Keith has mentioned it, I think he's right. Jx
jane210660
8 years 10 months ago
Damn phone sent twice. Jx
Damn phone sent twice. Jx
Esker
8 years 10 months ago
excellently put together
Like a poem within a vessel set to the travel
of the sea Watchmen
beings and besties
(the odd mermaid can help!)
Thank U!