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Barbara Writes
Barbara Writes
Jul 08, 2020 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

All is Well In My World

There’s a lot to see under the sun
There’s a lot to hear under the moon
Under the dark of night, creatures sing songs of joy
Daylight brings hustle and bustle of daytime

COVID 19 a pandemic arrived
Earth heals in the night.

The flicker of a candle burns bright in the night
Brings delight to eyes that all is well in my world.

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

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Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

4 years 12 months ago

thanks

I appreciate your visit to my work. I corrected the grammar. Glad you like it

Gracy

Gracy

5 years ago

Dear Barbara, I song of joy,

Dear Barbara, I song of joy, indeed. My only nit is that it's a tad prosy. Myself, I would try a re-write of some verses to do away with some "the's" and other unnecessary words.
All the same, enjoyed and thanks for sharing, keep bringing joy to this family. All the best, Gracy

R

raj

5 years ago

Hi Barbara

Good to read your poem ....nice one...others have already commented before me...

be well..