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May 13, 2016
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alls momentary
Just a moment’s worth
A moment is
for just a moment only...
not forever!!!!!!
but absolutely momentary
all is theoretically relative
ask Einstein...
where all has he been......
nothing lasts forever....
all is just worth
a night's love affair....
it lasts till
man's
lasts...
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
9 years 2 months ago
Each second...
clumps together with other seconds to make a moment and moments band together to make hours and hours to days and days...etc. Some moments aren't worth remembering, but the hours they comprise are precious! ~ Gee.
lovedly
9 years 2 months ago
second by second adds upto memories
so succinct
as does spell your beautiful ink
thank you Geezer
you smile as I
dare to wink
hahahaahaaa
lovedly
9 years 2 months ago
just a poets locker man till i can swin along
Nobody will ever read.....
such a long poem....
your vision
will not be envisioned...
but
your vision alone
of the aged old man shows
the old grand pa lived a life of joy...
and
you will follow.......soonly
looking into the vast wilderness
my eyes never tire
as there alone I see satisfaction
and
admire my true love
watching me from the distance
far that
far, far, really far
it's my minds vision