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Nov 28, 2017
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Always
There in my heart, I have felt many pains
Yet in my Spirit I knew the why’s of things.
Deep understanding of others, brush their souls
Live in their beings for a while you will feel.
Never be afraid of things you see in others
This is their battle and they must win
Let them lean on your shoulders, hold them
In your being there is infinite energy.
Never let your energy be used in any way
Let the universal energy bring you strength
Out there among all things, is a power house.
It is run by unconditional love always.
There but a thought away dwells forever.
All your yesterday’s todays and tomorrow’s
Will be there as you reach out to infinity
This belongs to you all, and will never change
No matter what or who you believe in,
Just walk within the goodness of being..
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Just a ten minute thought process.
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Simon
7 years 7 months ago
HOPE
Never be afraid of things you see in others,
this is their battle and they must win.
it gives hope and the energy to be always,i enjoyed this poem allot,thank you for this.
Sparrow
7 years 7 months ago
Simon
Thank you for your very prompt comment.
Never be afraid of being you, you walk in a physical world to learn of many things, just believe that it is your Spirit that is being trained and enhanced,
Thanks again go well, and "I see you"
Yours Ian..