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Dec 04, 2012
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Always On The Go
Always on the go
Pursuing happiness
chasing bliss
following a rainbow
trailing an afterglow
reliving old memories
tracing past glees
stalking mystery
Escaping sadness
shunning madness
hiding from tears
evading fears
fighting the years
avoiding the shadow
sneaking to and fro
always on the go
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
weirdelf
12 years 7 months ago
I seem to remember liking one of our poems,
but this cheerily sentimental crap has no poetic value.
sueb
12 years 7 months ago
sorry jess thanks again for
sorry jess thanks again for reading and commenting
weirdelf
12 years 7 months ago
Actally tonight I am inon of my bad moods.
I'm sure your poem had meaning and uplifting for someone.
aorry to be dick.
sueb
12 years 7 months ago
Hi Jess I'm sorry your in bad
Hi Jess I'm sorry your in bad form and I'm also sorry that as long as I enjoy writing I'm going to keep doing it I don't take offence easily and everyone's entited to an opinion hope your mood and weekend improves I'm out for a well-deserved pint with the girls it's been to long all the best x