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Jun 18, 2022
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AND I RETURNED HOME
Wanted a long sabbatical
the storm came
no you can't fly
the storms over your domain
come later again
till then at home do remain
be prepared
for a free flight
go home alas
now no sabbatical
keep singing or rhyming
damn you
lovedly
don't be silly
that I am
no work for me
but skipping
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About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
3 years ago
Yeah!...
you just keep making poetry; don't think about having time off. We won't allow it! Who do you think you are? having time off, indeed! I guess you missed your flight, huh? Oh well, there will be another time. Good piece about the frustration of not getting your little vacation.~Geez.
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lovedly
3 years ago
it seems you skipped these
At the last moment they canceled the flight
alarming storm
now go home sabbatical wow
now
sing your song
they r awaiting to hear your blaring deafy dear.
Next time take us along
SING SONG
ah but
THE STORM was still on
ADVANCE THANK YOU FOR READING GEE
Candlewitch
3 years ago
dear Lovedly,
don't worry that you can't get away...make a nice cup of tea, play music that you love, and have scented bath.
*love, Cat
lovedly
3 years ago
high CATS and GEE
At the last moment they canceled the flight alarming storm now go home sabbatical wow now sing your song they r awaiting to hear your blaring deafy dear. Next time take us along SING SONG THE STORM was still on