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And As Of Now
Headlong toward the final analysis,
where life is in summary.
A series of snapshots,
moments, stacked up against us.
But when the light goes
what will have been the point?
Where will we find an ending?
where will we lay our casket?
And as of now?
There is surely a place test bedded for each,
and that place is here,
and the time is now.
Be certain to own this instant,
this moment which had no price.
There is gratification
and there is life,
life is where you find where love lives.
And love is truly our richest gift,
Love is also in your gift to give.
Pryderi Duntz
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Lived? Not quite complete. Life? Oh a Work In Progress. Purpose? You tell me!
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Ray Whitaker
2 years 6 months ago
Nice piece here
Love the q’s raised…
Pryderi Duntz.
2 years 6 months ago
Feed back.
Thank you for reading this piece. I am happy you found something here. Pryderi.
Candlewitch
2 years 6 months ago
hello Pryderi,
strong statements stated here. I like what you have done with this piece. just one suggestion: remove all of the "ands" it doesn't need them. read it out loud and you will se the difference. otherwise it is very good work... quite stimulating!
*hugs, Cat