And so it rains....

Dark clouds gather,
thunder's greeting
shook the ground.

Wild is the wind,
howling like a banshee,
dispersing fallen leaves.

The song of frogs
growing louder in anticipation
to end the nature's thirst.

Within moments,
heaven's blessings attained
and so it rains..

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: singapore, SGP

Favorite Poets: Emily Dickinson, Robert Frost, Sarojini Naidu and friends in Neopoet.

Comments

Rula

9 years 5 months ago

Khalid

This is beautiful.
I feel a bit envious :)

alidzain

9 years 5 months ago

Salam, Rula

Thanks for the visit, the read and the encouraging comment.

Alid

scribbler

9 years 5 months ago

Hi Alid

This reminds me that spring thunderstorms are approaching before long. You have a very descriptive poem but it's also brief which is something I seldom achieve lol.........stan

alidzain

9 years 5 months ago

Hi Stan

I'm not good at writing lengthy poems. Think short is better but that depends on the form and the mood while I'm writing it.

Alid

scribbler

9 years 5 months ago

hi

Nothing wrong with brief. Not all poems should run on and on like a lot of mine do lol......stan