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May 20, 2019
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And there she was
And there she was, a light in the darkness
an oasis in a desert place;
and all the others faded into the distance
my eyes hoarding light only for her.
I watched as she danced, saw a celebration,
an outgoing of joy and warmth and love.
And when later I looked full in her face
I thought, “how beautiful you are!”
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
6 years 1 month ago
A nice simple...
piece that spells out the romance and love for a desert flower! Very nice and direct, but still something that might be said to a woman that you are smitten by! ~ Geezer.
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tyro
6 years 1 month ago
yes, I was smitten.
yes, I was smitten.