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Sep 10, 2011
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Anger , strong adult language - writing with emotion workshop
Skank
Fucking mother fucker
makes me want to rip heads off.
Two bit male slag
Can't keep it in his pants
Whips it out when ever he can
Want to destroy the arse holes
Of the species
Castrate scum suckers of this world.
I'm not a violent girl
I'm meek and mild
shouldn't let you do this to me
But my blood boils
Feel the need to massacre
when I see you dicking me around
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lou
13 years 9 months ago
lol
what little old me?
lou
raj
13 years 9 months ago
Lou
this write does express anger...i suggest you take off the line "I'm meek and mild" because it softens the poem...sort of takes the steam out of the anger...
lou
13 years 9 months ago
Lol
Thanks it's pure fiction of course lol
Lou
raj
13 years 9 months ago
Guys...stay out of the way of
Guys...stay out of the way of these girls..they are in a murderous mood...lol...
lou
13 years 9 months ago
LOL
Good guys don't need to worry LMAO!!
Lou
Candlewitch
13 years 9 months ago
Dear Lou,
Two bit male slag
Can't keep it in his pants
Whips it out when ever he can
Excellent head of steam you have going here!
always, Cat
lou
13 years 9 months ago
Cat
Thank you it was kinda hard to stop LMAO!!
Love Lou
lou
13 years 9 months ago
Calmness
Calmness has returned
LOL
lou
Rhiannon1010
13 years 7 months ago
WOW !!!
You go girl!!! this REALLLLLY shows some anger. This poem is like a pissy freight train for the mind! GOAL ACHEIVED! rotflmao
lou
13 years 7 months ago
hi
thanks i'm really glad that you liked it
lou