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lou
lou
This poem is part of the workshop:

Writing With Emotions

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Anger , strong adult language - writing with emotion workshop

Skank
Fucking mother fucker
makes me want to rip heads off.

Two bit male slag 
Can't keep it in his pants
Whips it out when ever he can

Want to destroy the arse holes
Of the species
Castrate scum suckers of this world.

I'm not a violent girl 
I'm meek and mild 
shouldn't let you  do this to me

But my blood boils 
Feel the need to massacre 
when I see you dicking me around 

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda , Jack Kerouac, Alan Ginsberg, D.H Lawrence, Jim Morrison's lyrics,

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lou

lou

13 years 9 months ago

lol

what little old me?

lou

R

raj

13 years 9 months ago

Lou

this write does express anger...i suggest you take off the line "I'm meek and mild" because it softens the poem...sort of takes the steam out of the anger...

lou

lou

13 years 9 months ago

Lol

Thanks it's pure fiction of course lol

Lou

lou

lou

13 years 9 months ago

LOL

Good guys don't need to worry LMAO!!

Lou

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

13 years 9 months ago

Dear Lou,

Two bit male slag
Can't keep it in his pants
Whips it out when ever he can

Excellent head of steam you have going here!

always, Cat

lou

lou

13 years 9 months ago

Cat

Thank you it was kinda hard to stop LMAO!!

Love Lou

lou

lou

13 years 9 months ago

Calmness

Calmness has returned

LOL

lou

Rhiannon1010

Rhiannon1010

13 years 7 months ago

WOW !!!

You go girl!!! this REALLLLLY shows some anger. This poem is like a pissy freight train for the mind! GOAL ACHEIVED! rotflmao

lou

lou

13 years 7 months ago

hi

thanks i'm really glad that you liked it

lou