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Animatronics
TIME!
It changes all things
It never rests despite if we do
In a world obsessed with technology
Robots and Androids seen in films
Are sure to soon be a reality
On Earth as servants and friends
Imagine a world where pets are replaced
By animatronics
Who take care of themselves and are around
To make us happy
Where servants and services are replaced
By androids and robot labor
It's not too far off
Where all of this is entirely possible
I believe in balance
We should hold life as sacred but
Embrace new technology
While leaving room for people and pets
In our lives as true companions
Who have thoughts and emotions
Unlike that of a robot
Scientists now are fascinated by
Playing God and giving birth to
Clones of animals and
Artificial Intelligence
Are human beings next in line?
To be given birth in a lab artificially
With no parents or family to hold dear
That is unforgivable and wrong
It is something that should be made illegal
Think of the poor children
Before experimenting on them
What if you were the child that they
Were about to conceive?
How would you feel not to have the comfort
Of a warm loving family?
Think before you act
That is a lesson that we can learn from
In today's age
About This Poem
        Review Request Direction:
        How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
      
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
 
                
Comments
Geezer
10 years 4 months ago
Not exactly...
poetry, more like a dissertation of future trends. However, I think you are blessed with a creative mind and if you use some rhythm and rhyme, it would be better. ~ Geezer
Sparrow
10 years 4 months ago
Sopho
I agree with Gee, to put a few rhyming lines in there or to break it into Stanzas of a form of some sort would be good and not so factual.
Just let you work sing I see you teach art, well poetry is a very old art near as old as cave drawings except the words without a written language had to be taught in sing song.
So another art form to your learning.
Take care Yours, Ian..