Another Friend Bails Out

HOUR OF SADNESS

At our age
daily one needs to be ready
to go
else hear the sad news
one just goes
where heaven knows

May those who have lived a long life
''REST IN PEACE ''
convey to all
as and when

Somewhere beyond beyond
many hope to meet
God keep Hope alive
in one and all
as and when
'tis time

Last Few Words: When its time it is TIME

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

2 years 7 months ago

a lesson for us all. No one gets out alive! ~ Geez.
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2 years 7 months ago

Hi, Lovedly,
Your poem is direct, yet calm. True - when it's time, it is time.
Lav

2 years 7 months ago

your and Gee's support are my finale in all my poetree thnx
Lav

2 years 7 months ago

to inform you, that unless there is a double entendre intended, [bale] should be spelled [bail].
Just wanted to let you know. ~ Geez.
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2 years 7 months ago

Thanks corrected