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ANOTHER LEASE OF LIFE

A short while ago
doc said so

Now you go eat the diet I laid for you
relax all will be well for you
gave me a thinking of a lease
at least more nine lives

then the cell rang loudly
doc here
I withdraw fully

You haven't fed me well
So I will have to rethink
the terms of lease

wait for some time
walk
no tension
okay my young son

son

perhaps you are like my son
I pop to thee

Finalize the lease hopefully
I wanted to drink

funny doc he
guys help me

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Question is how much on docs must we rely

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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mddy

4 years 5 months ago

Dear Lovedly,

Thought provoking piece! I find myself wanting to reread!

lovedly

lovedly

4 years 5 months ago

you mddy

young poetess
are most welcome to do so

Any views suggestions would be welcome