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Nov 27, 2016
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another UNTITLED
To cool one wants
to quench
and
drench
in rain
and
liquid
is one's
manifestation
yours is rains
others
down that drains
what remains
of desires
nothing obtains
some still in vanilla
sustain!
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
alidzain
8 years 7 months ago
loved
How about "Desires"?
Alid
lovedly
8 years 7 months ago
hahaha you would knw better
u r singular