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Answer me
I am ready to take you to on a long drive my love,
I am ready to leave my whole work for you,
I am going to ride you in expensive car love,
Woah oh ho say something for me,
Will you sit in my car love?
Woah oh ho say something will you go on a ride with me?
Woah oh ho...
Listen to me I am telling you the truth that I can feel good vibes,
Will you accept my apologies? Let me make you my wife,
Woah oh ho say yes or no will you accept my apology,
Woah oh ho say yes or no will you be wife,
Woah oh ho say something my life
Woah oh ho...
Will take you for a date,
Will celebrate with you, buy you a cake,
Don't worry about anything,
I can manage so many things,
I'll will buy you a pair of earnings,
I'll say your name all the time,
Will you be mine?
Say woah oh ho with me,
Say yes or no will you stay with me...
Will you say Schrey with me,
Woah oh ho say Yes or No baby!!!
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
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Comments
Schrey
4 years 10 months ago
Thanks. It was really helpful
Thanks. It was really helpful.
Gracy
4 years 10 months ago
Hi Schrey, welcome to Neopoet,
Hi Schrey, welcome to Neopoet, here we help eachother with our posts. I think Terry has already pointed out important bits. I agree. This does sound as if it were written as lyrics for rap, is that so?
Hope you come back, as I'm confused. All the best, Gracy