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Jan 17, 2012
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Antidote
In a dark room she is a glimpse of light
On a sad face she is a glowing smile
The sun on a cloudy and misty day
She is the antidote to that dis ease
The sweet sound of friendly conversation
When the only one listening is the wall
The scissors to suffocating ropes
The promise between all the lies
The honest Abe amongst politicians
The artwork on a blank wall
The enemy of uninvited insecurity
Meet my better half, poetry
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
weirdelf
13 years 6 months ago
I thought you were going to change the title to "Antidote"
"Poetry" as a title sucks badly.
Love this new piece in the incredible growth you have been writing recently.
Esker
13 years 6 months ago
love title
nothing like changes
will come back to this later